tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7484590598029250440.post7294097020433912078..comments2023-06-02T03:50:51.134-05:00Comments on Midwest "Mom"ments: HeavenNot Just Another Jenniferhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01455496431589188635noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7484590598029250440.post-14720126162301623482011-03-28T15:20:59.955-05:002011-03-28T15:20:59.955-05:00Thank you so much for the comments.I really apprec...Thank you so much for the comments.I really appreciate the concrit!<br /><br />I'd like to think donuts are a food group in heaven. Along with chocolate, of course. Thank you so much for reading!Not Just Another Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01455496431589188635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7484590598029250440.post-84645938647883024032011-03-26T06:38:02.613-05:002011-03-26T06:38:02.613-05:00This was sad and beautiful. I hope you're righ...This was sad and beautiful. I hope you're right, that there are donuts in abundance up there.Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01564542013071462911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7484590598029250440.post-64338497776250862732011-03-26T00:03:54.775-05:002011-03-26T00:03:54.775-05:00Totally teared up. I can't even offer concrit....Totally teared up. I can't even offer concrit.<br /><br />What a beautiful picture you painted.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7484590598029250440.post-55312530453197682832011-03-25T19:23:16.327-05:002011-03-25T19:23:16.327-05:00I'm all choked up over here. This was too emot...I'm all choked up over here. This was too emotional of a piece for me to be able to offer concrit. You created beautiful imagery and showed such a wonderful place.McKennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09299201553545817162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7484590598029250440.post-78271426253599245522011-03-25T19:20:48.641-05:002011-03-25T19:20:48.641-05:00Hey Jennifer! Welcome back and congrats to your w...Hey Jennifer! Welcome back and congrats to your writing partner. She should check out On the Rocks and Straight Up (@angiekinghorn). She has twins.<br /><br />First, love the concept here. What a creative place to go with the prompt!<br /><br />I would have liked to have understood a little earlier where we were. I felt like it took me a bit to get to heaven. I thought you were being metaphorical. <br /><br />Also, I wanted you to break up your exposition a little--you have such great work choices but the 3rd paragraph is a tad long. I wanted to savor all the tasty descriptions of heaven and praise but my eyes got bogged down in words.<br /><br />I loved the bright eyed wonder of the child's point of view. You did that so well. I read every word wanting to see more of the world you created for her.Honest Convo Galhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04164936942751145568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7484590598029250440.post-82431347114108106022011-03-25T14:37:16.526-05:002011-03-25T14:37:16.526-05:00this is really lovely - thank you so much. I'...this is really lovely - thank you so much. I've daydreamed about heaven, too - but I like your picture of a little girl feeling instantly at home here...because of those sprinkles. Glad to have found your blog...diana trautweinhttp://drgtjustwondering.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com